GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION





GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION


You are latter-day RobinsonCrusoe. You are stranded on a desert island. It´s been ten days since you got shipwrecked and you start losing hope of being rescued. In order to keep track of time you decide to write a diary.Your diary will be in the format of a blog. In groups of 3 to 4 students. You have to write your impressions of your life on the island, making an account of your daily activities. For such, we will be visiting the school´s cyber room every now and then: once to start the blog (choosing a name, writing an introduction, presenting yourself, giving background information to the creation of the blog); a couple of times to add information to it, and one last time to read your mates´blogs and write comments on them. Pictures are highly welcome. Be creative. You can add ideas but cannot change the factual information in the story.






Turma 81 Grupo 2 A

My name is Robinson Crusoe.I was born in 1950, I live in New York and I have 2 brothers.One is a soldier, his name is Diogo and the other one is a singer, his name's Alejandro.My dad is a merchant and my mom is a housewife.My dream is to be a captain.At the moment I'm just a sailor.Well, I thought so, because in my last voyage my ship sank because a huge storm hit us.I escaped 'cause I saw one island and I swam until there.When I got there I slept for 2 days.When I woke up I started looking after for other sailors.But I haven't found anyone.I was walking when I saw my ship wrecked in the beach.My first thought was "I need to get to the ship".So, I swam until there.In the ship I found a lot of things that would be useful in the island, like food, clothes, gunpowder and guns.I built a raft.I brought the things so as the dog that I found to the island.            (04/10/2010)

With those things I built my hut. And I lot of other stuff. Now I want food and I want sleep. I put up a large piece of wood on the shore where I had landed because wanted count the months and the years that I would spend there. Over the last few months, I spent a lot of time making my hut bigger and better. One day I started becoming very ill but some time later I started to prepare a medicine from tabacco. After It I started feel better. Than I travelled along the Island.       (11/11/10)

Some months later, I started to plant corn and rice. On my third year on the island I was able to pick my rice and corn. I was pleased that I migth one day have bread. I made some pots. So I could cooking. For the rest of the year on the island I made those things and looked after my corn. When the corn grew, I baked my own bread. I built a canoe. When I tried  to sailed the currents were so strong that my little boat was pulled far out to sea. But I was lucky. Around the lunch time the wind started growing. Suddenly it was very strong so I could go back to my island. I thanked God. But when I had been on the island for eleven years, I became worried that I had only a little gunpowder left. So my most important job now was to catch some goats and tame than. I hoped that I could keep tame goats and then kill them without using my gun. When I killed a goat, I dried its skin and I used the skins to make clothes to myself

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