GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION





GUIDELINES FOR OUR WRITTEN PRODUCTION


You are latter-day RobinsonCrusoe. You are stranded on a desert island. It´s been ten days since you got shipwrecked and you start losing hope of being rescued. In order to keep track of time you decide to write a diary.Your diary will be in the format of a blog. In groups of 3 to 4 students. You have to write your impressions of your life on the island, making an account of your daily activities. For such, we will be visiting the school´s cyber room every now and then: once to start the blog (choosing a name, writing an introduction, presenting yourself, giving background information to the creation of the blog); a couple of times to add information to it, and one last time to read your mates´blogs and write comments on them. Pictures are highly welcome. Be creative. You can add ideas but cannot change the factual information in the story.






Turma 81 Grupo 2 B

My name is Robison Crusoe and i was born in 1632 in'i came from a good family my father was germany and my mother was english  i have two brothers one become a soldier  i died and the other we don´t know abaut ? my family was god no too rich and not too poor.but i had a dream i wanted to go to sea, I wanted to go trevelind my family don´t wanted to me go to sea but wat can i do i have to do dis my father said to me that if i wanted to go to sea god will be not pleased  but i ...]'


04/10/10

{img_a}I wanted to go to sea because i wanted to be a sailor, to explore and to discover the world.Then one day i go out to the city to met a friend because he has a ship.when the ship left the city  a big storm began, i was so scary because i think the boat will sink and all the sailors will die. I remember my father and my mother saying to me do not go to sea you will goin to die.I think  god left me behind for die in sea.i began to pray to god saying i never going more to sea.In the morning everybody was ok and the sea was calmer than last night.The sea was clear and the sun was shining.Then a few days later a storm began again and everybody was scary to die.this storm was worst because the wind was more stronger and the waves was huges than the others.Everyone was praing god to don´t die
{img_a}and continue to be a sailor and  living yours lifes with yours familis.Then in the night a men sai for me the water was coming into the ship and  he was begining to sink.One wave bring me to the shore. I was plesure by God because i was alive.

I was alone on that island and everybody was dead.On the first day on the island the storm has died down


In the first days are began to explore the island and I build a big hut for I live and survive in that island and I started to collect my food.So I began to think a way to get out of this island so I decided to build a canoe.So one day I was walking in the sand so I found a footprint.

over the next few months i spent a lot of time making my hut bigger and better. i began to write a diary and i started to break the day up into parts . I went out with my gun for to or three hours . than i worked on my hut or my table. A few months after I had arrived on the island i was amazed to find some corn growing near my hut and later some rice. one day just after had finished working on my hut the top of my cave suddely started fallin i was too scaredto goback insade my tent so i sat outside  a few days later i found some pieces  from the  ship lyingom the shore. I also found that the wreckof the ship have been broken open and pushed in towards the shore by the earthquake.A couple of mounths after the eartquake , i became very  ill with a fever, and i decited to resd the bible becausa i think i go to died.

My hut was finished so i desided to go up the river  where there was lovely grass fields with  tobacco growingn the higher . I was surprised to  find grapes and melons growing and continuing on , i came to a beutiful green areaof the island which was full of orange , lumon and lime trees it was like a planted ganden.


I made an expedition through the island, and found an orchard and goats, which later acquired the ability to tame them. I discovered that the land is fertile and the plant goes. I learned to prepare breads, cakes and make Vasilias clay for food storage. After 23 years I found on the island. now would be easier to build another boat and drag it. But soon I was surprised by savages who landed on the island bringing Cristiano and his father on Friday. save us from death in a battle against the savages. A few days later it is time to disembark with a British military prisoners. It is a captain and two assistants who are there for not obeying the order of the military and drug traffickers to smuggle slaves to navio.eu and Friday we are saved and guarantee food and shelter to the rescue of the captain commanding the vessel. I, Captain Friday and leave on the island five bandits because they believe in their recovery and do not wish to be responsible for their death. After 30 years I returned to civilization on the island with a parrot, a journal and a friend Friday and an experience that changes the life of a man.
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